Every minute every day, people suffer and lives are lost needlessly because of a lack of safe water and sanitation, the population is being viewed as the real problem and controlling birthrates should totally address the problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
In some latest years, people all over the world have suffered from shortages of clean water and basic sanitation due to the impacts of over population. In order to alleviate this pattern, birth rates control appears as the first and foremost solution.
It is directly proven that that decreases in population facilitate higher living standard for citizens in general. First, it allows those people to use water with a stricter sanitation since the time for process is shorter and the revenue is lower. In reality, many countries in the Third World, especially those in Africa, have dense population. Second, by limiting the number of residents, every single nation can provide high quality hospital to patients, which acts as an incentive for long life expectancy.
Nevertheless, people and governments can take steps to control birth rates as primary solution for this issue. First, there is a fact that the number of new-born babies every year usually surpasses that of the old naturally dying, which means that it is more effective for us to control the birth rates. Otherwise, baby booming at current time could have become disaster for the next generations. Second, minimizing population allows people to efficiently utilize scare resources. For instance, with the same budget, if a family have only two children, their children will have more chances for education and health care services compared to the four-child one.
In conclusion, overpopulation leads to many other problems including lack of fundamental necessities. Only through law innovation for birth rates can the world prevent this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, so, third, for instance, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3046875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69900109922 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4113578743 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103226911466 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375495523956 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285861245409 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632003125698 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00415236033865 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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