In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service* instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison.
Do you agree or disagree?
Crimes are private wrongs and often committed by all ages. However, some people assert that all types of criminals should send to the jail while others condemn and say that should be diverted to the community services. I utterly believe that imprisonment is not an actual punishment to several kinds of crimes. The forthcoming paragraphs will scrutinize my virtues.
At the outset of this new millennium, unless murder or robbery is concerned, individuals who commit minor mistakes should not be put into the jail because isolation provides them an another opportunity to think of the various other types of crimes. Also, they should be given other chance for improvement so that they can learn something ameliorate from such thing. It is an undeniable fact that youngsters always start to take drugs in the jails along with their companions. So, assigning them community services seems a better option.
Although it is essential to teach them a lesson for their future endeavor by punishing them.In addition, when they deprived of and amenities and other privileges in the jail they will surely better think to commit a crime second time. But, still, some offenders boost their strength after being imprisoned. Therefore, it is advisable to indulge them in socialization so that they can avoid anti-social contacts and improve their mistakes.
Hammering the last nail of this topic, it is sensible as well as an appropriate measure for individuals who do thefts and other identical crimes should be addressed to do societal services in lieu of imprisonment which, maybe, mount up their enthusiasm and confidence to commit severe offences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an opportunity' or 'another opportunity'.
Suggestion: an opportunity; another opportunity
...he jail because isolation provides them an another opportunity to think of the various other types of ...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...their future endeavor by punishing them.In addition, when they deprived of and ame...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, second, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22264150943 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75589532823 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630188679245 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.328856255 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205993946051 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070293502092 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649583465328 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131923019482 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616595182611 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.