It is more common theses days to see young adults get married early, assumingly just before they finished their education and got a job. I am the opinion that people get married early due to the advantages that they harness from the marriage in which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, getting married early help young adults settle down easier due to the benefit of reducing living cost. As the matter of fact, the cost for two people living together is much cheaper than the combined cost of two separate individuals. For example, if living together, two people could reduce the cost of accommodation up to fifty percent while maintaining the convenient that one living alone. Therefore, the extra money could be saved and be use for other purposes such as buying new clothes or put into the bank for emergencies.
Secondly, getting married early will also beneficial in term of having better health care. When two people are living together, they could take care of each other in the time of sickness or when emergencies happen. The story of myself could be used to illustrated this point. When I studied abroad in Korea in 2012, I suffered from serious illness and unable to do work. For two weeks, I have to stay at home and take care of myself. At the time, I was only able to prepare simple, malnutritional food and therefore, was recovered very slowly.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that getting married early will bring more benefit than living alone. I feel this for two reasons, which stand on the economical advantage and also on the better health care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7725631769 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45588745258 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6521182036 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124213222572 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470041676276 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627236580605 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914623802713 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064971068876 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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