The advancement in medical care has brought many benefits for men and women in term of improving the quality of their lives and increase the average life expectancy. Although most of the changes could be considered as a positive development, some issues still remain within the aging population which I will explain in the following essay.
Nowadays, people live healthier and happier life as a result of advances in medical care. The average age of people is gradually increased in the course of fifty years together with the quality of life. For example, my grandfather died at the age of sixty due to severe infectious disease. This type of illness could be prevented this day thank to the improvement in hygiene and better health care. Preventative diagnosis with personalized medicine also plays a role in breaking the age barrier and help people live their lives in the most convenient way.
But all the advancement in medical care, as well as technological breakthrough, also bring up issues that needed to be dealt with. One of the disadvantages could be a new disease in the ageing population such as neurodegenerative disease or cognitive decline. Alzheimer's and Parkinson's disease is the two common illness that affects most of senior citizens in the age over sixties. These diseases targeted neurons in the brain and broke the connection between them, leading to the loss of motor function, neuronal damages, and cognitive decrement. Therefore, even though people living a longer life, they are also suffering from the disability caused by the disease.
Overall, the advances in medical care have brought much of positive development, issues still remain in the aging population such as the introduction of new disease that affect their well-being.
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- INTEGRATED TASK: Summarize the points in the lecture stating how they cast doubts on the reading passage topic points. 3
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18881118881 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88220496876 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2159870636 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276638920845 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985643718893 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660163487975 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17616381699 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682804343357 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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