Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The progress means that the person certain places to sticks and work hard for achieving good results. In world two types of the person regarding the progress in which one types of people progress to get the happiness to other people and other kinds of people progress to other people disappointed or harm. From my vantage point, I concur that progress is always better for human life but certain activities which are harm or threaten to other people this sorts of progress not good one.
To begin with, every person wants to the progress in their life in a particular job, study, and workplace. For example, I put my full energy and time for study because of I want to increase my grades which help to get me highest GPA with good score. If I will pass out with the good score my family, friends, and teacher feel happy and praises to me. This high score to me will get the better job at the higher position.
Furthermore, in India economic level surging in past decade which is bring good wealth in a certain state of the country. In sport, Indian people participate in each sports activity and not only men but women also engage the specific sports such as football, badminton, kabaddi... This progression to other Indian women and men get the inspired and increase the participation rate and make stronger Indian team. This is an appreciation for those good sportsmen and women who are a help to surging the country value.
Moreover, the progression in technology gives comfort and luxurious life to a human being such as transportation, the internet, schools, and college laboratory equipment and machinery in industries, business development and so on; all these kinds of progress to fortified the India economy level and status.
However, some types of criminal activities such as terrorism, riot, rebellious event which cause perilous to all mankind society. This progress is given a detrimental effect on the society and even not good for themselves who are engrossed this event.
In conclusion, every person endeavors to make progress in their field to make better future and give satisfied life to the family but some people choose the wrong path for happiness and this types of the progress harm to other people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because I' instead.
Suggestion: because I
...I put my full energy and time for study because of I want to increase my grades which help t...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...c level surging in past decade which is bring good wealth in a certain state of the c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88157894737 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57171246179 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502631578947 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.738839032 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120502763894 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456123126348 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300151477337 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623125185281 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262546809343 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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