Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time
Discuss both these views and give your opinion
Free hours in this contemporary world is a rare gift. Hence, those spare time should be utilized productively for the betterment of our health, especially our mind. In my perspective, I agree that, our mind should be rested during those times, due to improve our focus the next day and to avoid some mental disorders.
Firstly, resting the brain activities during the leisure time is the best mode of relaxation. The activities such as, Yoga and meditation coaches us to relax ourselves after a day of heavy work life. This will help us to freshness our mind and organs, which in return facilitate us to improve the power of focus the following day. Therefore, relaxing our brain process is critical in this competitive environment.
Secondly, similar to a machine, excess usage of our mind will lead to negative health hazards. This could lead to mental disorders, due to stress and anger. These will not only affect an individual, but also their love ones. To avoid those risks a human should need to take time off and should be in an environment, which gives you a peaceful mind.
However, brain development activities during free time will help to improve the capacity of it. This is highly recommended for children under age of 12, during which the brain development will be at its peak. For example, playing cards, building blocks and board games will help them to keep their mind active.
When all the above are taken into consideration, I accept the fact that, the process of mind should be in relaxing mode during time off. This will facilitate in higher focus and avoid mental disorders. Finally, this will pave way for a good health in future and live a warmth and peaceful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83219178082 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56326179583 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8536982047 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165084161578 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565363092582 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048299259155 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974842545368 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212287507458 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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