Write a letter to a friend about a museum or gallery you visited recently.
Why you went to the museum or gallery
What you saw
Why you do or do not recommend it
Hi John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and happiness. On the 20th January 2017, I went to attend the National art Museum in my town.
Firstly, I had planned nothing for the Saturday 20th January 2017. My next-door neighbor had a spare ticket of the National Art Museum and urged me to accompany him. Since I had no arrangement I accepted his request and decided to give it a try although I had some preconceived notions about this museum based on my friend's and relative opinion.
Secondly, I knew that it's not going to be a fun time but to my surprise I actually got fascinated by the paintings, sculptures and the handicrafts displayed in the museum. Apart from this, they also have a classical music show which lasted for about an hour and I was amazed to see that the sheer change in lyrics can produce such a good song.
Thirdly, I recommend you to take sometime out or apply for a half-day leave to witness this grand event which is happening next month in your town. I am sure that after watching this event you are going to drop me a thank you note for letting you know about such a wonderful thing but that's ok.
Do let me know how was your overall experience at the event.
Many Thanks
FaizalReza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 215, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ing this event you are going to drop me a thank you note for letting you know about suc...
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Line 9, column 286, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...u know about such a wonderful thing but thats ok. Do let me know how was your over...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46086956522 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42769153732 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639130434783 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1806071228 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2727272727 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 4.34317383033 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240043005023 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759658105244 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717425360016 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119738887818 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818997089819 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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