Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people believe that spending money on any form of parties is a sheer waste of money. However the issue is not entirely straightforward, although some arguments can also be made against the idea. In this essay, the debate will be discussed, and will be given a concluding view.
On the one hand, proponents who support the idea of spending money on birthday parties cite various benefits it can bring to an Individual and the society as well. Firstly, It is not uncommon for people to catch-up with the relatives, friends and neighbours on the wedding day with bewildered feeling because they haven't had the chance to talk to each other for a long period of time. In addition to this, It gives them an opportunity also to reconnect again in upcoming future. Secondly, These events happen not too often and only come in the life of the people when they can enjoy, relax and ponder upon what next target they may want to achieve. For instance, Birthday parties are being held to let the kid feel special where most people from society showers their blessings and wishes on kid. Finally, Events like these often help boost the morale, spirit and well-being of a person because it will not only help them to be productive at work but would also improve the GDP of the economy.
However, opponents point out their view that wasting money on these parties can bring negative side effects on the children especially the young pupil. Firstly, It is quite a usual business for people to waste money on these events which can bring nothings but will buy children mirth and blessings from the people for a small amount of time. Secondly, young children spent money on items lavishly without even realising the actual value of the money while it can become an impediment factor for their future growth. Thirdly, if public were to put their money for donation, It would help in eradicating the poverty to some extent.
Overall, Individuals should try to cut down the expenditure as much as they can while realizing the importance of it meant to be of their use for a limited while giving eradicating poverty and providing accessibility to poor children on the education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47381882028 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549333333333 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7112068012 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212075704829 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772025979389 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508702359148 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122329491225 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448227758136 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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