There are numerous perspectives about the rapid changes of the world. Some people state that people nowadays feel less happy and satisfied with their lives than in the past. Personally, I disagree with this statement.
First and foremost, what I put in my priority is health improvement. The fact is that, in modern day, people are able to receive health care services better than ever before. They are possible to access and utilize high quality facilities such as hospitals, clinics and so on; advanced technologies in treatment like laser surgery. They are also attain better health insurance and more concerns from government. As a result, health quality is increasing considerably. More interestingly, the development of science creates chances for people to use better medicines. Various fatal diseases in the past are now cured successfully, therefore, people'health are protected well. Indeed, with health improvement, people' lives are more happy and satisfied.
In the second place, education enhancement is another essential factor contributing to the essence. It is widely known that, education now is compulsory and widespread. Many people are likely to go to school and study, not just for only the wealthy and notable classes in the past. By having golden chances for learning, people, especially children have the possibility to enlarge and acculumate their knowledge. Hence, they are able to get better salary and their quality of life will augment. By and large, people will be happier and more satisfied by the development of education.
Lastly, personal enjoyment is what cannot be left out when considering the essence. It is well noted that, communication between people has never been easier than today. People can chat, talk, share their thoughts with others very quickly and over huge distance. For that reason, their lives will be full of happiness and enjoyment. More notably, people today have a large number of recreational forms. While there was a little ways to relax in the past, there are abundant forms of recreation nowadays such as theater, cinema, amusement park and so on. These help people to release stress and replenish energy after hard time working and studying. Because of this, people now are more elated than in the past. With no doubt, personal enjoyment is a key factor to make people'lives more satisfied.
In summary, health improvement, education enhancement, personal enjoyment are convincing reasons for the viewpoint that people today are more happy and satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'attained'.
Suggestion: attained
...tment like laser surgery. They are also attain better health insurance and more concer...
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Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...oyment. More notably, people today have a large number of recreational forms. While there was a l...
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Line 7, column 429, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...ational forms. While there was a little ways to relax in the past, there are abundan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, second, so, therefore, well, while, in summary, no doubt, such as, as a result, by and large, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29339853301 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73595770756 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557457212714 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1549764202 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1851851852 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1481481481 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294813623575 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792613063717 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878972200358 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209850577624 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116466849196 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.