The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second paragraph shows the green house gas emission which result from this energy use
The first pie chart gives information about the usage of energy in a middle-class Australian household. The second one illustrates the green house gases emissions discharged from the used energy.
Overall, the amount of emissions in almost corresponding with the types of energy use and the water heating accounts for the highest proportion in the second chart.
As is observed, while the amount of energy utilized for heating accounts for the highest percentage (42%), it only discharges 15% of gas emissions. By contrast, the figures for water heating are quiet similar, 30% energy use corresponding with 32% of emissions. Australian citizens spend 15% of energy for other appliances, however, they generate nearly double amount of gas emissions, at 28%.
Likewise, the figure for refrigeration is 7%, which is as half as the its greenhouse gas amount. The lightning and cooling use 4% and 2% of energy respectively and consequently, they release an amount of gas emissions which contributes 8% and 3% respectively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, likewise, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28395061728 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.036936664 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1016604657 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315455821609 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148062149914 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675232474748 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213322300053 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764539113002 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.