Some people say taxes should be spent on healthcare, others think more priorities should be invested in. Dicuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many people suggest governments should allocate their financial budget from taxes to healthcare services while others believe some other important fields should be more well-funded. In my opinion, every aspect of a society shares an equal role in the general prosperity of its economy and needs to be financed properly.
On the one hand, healthcare is of significant essence for the well-being of people in a country as a whole. In fact, greater influx of governments' funding in improving the medical utilities would ensure the safety of the citizens of that country in the event of traffic accidents or natural calamities. Furthermore, the threat from fatal contagions, Ebola for example, puts huge strain on the medical systems. An enormous amount of national resources, therefore, is required for research as well as experiments facilities establishment to find curative medicines for those diseases.
On the other hand, other sectors such as education and technology are also factored in boosting the economy nationwide. Firstly, education is the key to secure a better future generation. With more state money for classroom modernization and teacher training, public school and institutions can provide practical knowledge to young people who will contribute back to the affluence of their country. Secondly, governments should focus their investments on technological innovation as well. It is apparent that modern technology is indispensable in the industrialized world since human labor is incomparable with that of machinery in term of efficiency. Thus, an emphasis should be placed on this area to benefit the overall growth of the economy.
In conclusion, I would argue that not only healthcare but also other determinants like education and technology should simultaneously receive the same governmental sponsorships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59139784946 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14699422741 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0325323519 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3076923077 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213370204954 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680004005144 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782270669349 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13002599784 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908140829498 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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