Education is cornerstone of our society. It is crucial to building the knowledge and skill of our younger people. The vast of universities try to change the system and provide facilities for students to enhance the education system. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this idea that improve the quality of the education requires to university spend money on salaries of the university professors or not. From my perspective view, I disagree with this notion that money spend on the wages of the professor which help to enhance the education because of not only the professor is factor that improve the students education but also other factor influence to the quality of the study which are discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in the modern era, students are not only relying on the tradition class room study but they are seeking the other source for getting the knowledge. University provides the facilities to students which is help to expand their knowledge. For example, in library add the latest book, magazine and latest resource this is encourage to students to engage in the study. For example, in my second year my chemistry assignment finish in only two day instead of five days because of huge material in the library which is help to me that i easily get the data. No need to buy expensive book and other sources.
Moreover, university should spend money in the student center which help to student meet to each other and increase the student’s interaction. In student center provides huge facilities such as dining hall, meeting room, lounge for hanging out, auditorium for entertainment and so on. Students can use this center to relaxing. Students can easily take the group discussion and group work in the meeting rooms. This students center help to feel relax and enjoying with friends.
However, many people think that spending money on the professor salary to improve the education, Professor motivate the students and provide the knowledge. But, I would argue that salary because of professor is not only key function for student’s education but also students need to other source for develop their knowledge and experience. If students psychologically happy then, they must well in their study but if they are mentally stress and not relaxing is directly impact on their study. Therefore, it is better to consider the whole factor which is influence on the student career.
In brief, contemplating aforementioned reasons, I disagree with the idea that enhance the quality of the education by spending the money on the professor salary because of students has need the extra knowledge, new skill and experience which are not build by only professor presence but need the other sources also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'build'?
Suggestion: build
...rstone of our society. It is crucial to building the knowledge and skill of our younger ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...he professor is factor that improve the students education but also other factor influen...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
...e to the quality of the study which are discuss in the forthcoming paragraphs. To begi...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...k, magazine and latest resource this is encourage to students to engage in the study. For...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... student center provides huge facilities such as dining hall, meeting room, loung...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...on and group work in the meeting rooms. This students center help to feel relax and ...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...sor presence but need the other sources also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in brief, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09911894273 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73833197971 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440528634361 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4735277369 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.75 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120591330282 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433458385002 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570766659479 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805624182492 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444211235038 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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