Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage.
What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
In this essay I am going to discuss the contemporary housing shortage in the big cities. It seems that the root of this problem is that the population is growing faster in the cities than in the rural territories, which people are leaving. In the final part of the essay I will give some suggestions on how problems with the scarcity of houses can be solved.
The first reason for such a shortage is that the city provides many more opportunities for work than the country.Therefore, people move to the towns in the search for better jobs (in search of). For instance, instead of working hard in the field they can enjoy calm and easy work in comfortable urban offices. Accommodation in the cities is also more convenient, especially if one lives in a flat, where not much cleaning is necessary. As a result, people’s quality of life increases.
The second reason is that most of the universities and colleges are in towns. Therefore people who come to study there need somewhere to live. Although universities often provide accommodation, students often get married during their studies and choose to stay in the city after their graduation. Because they have got used to living in the city, which incidentally has a bigger job market, life for many of them is better than before. They can spend their spare time in a wide variety of ways.
In conclusion, the scarcity of accommodation for new inhabitants is a really huge problem, and the demand for houses cannot be satisfied easily. Hence, it is necessary to persuade people to stay in or to go back to the country by creating new jobs, study facilities and entertainment services there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...universities and colleges are in towns. Therefore people who come to study there need som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, incidentally, really, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83098591549 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88052273519 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9205302497 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198866529264 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597297582442 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446518370705 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110716117262 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490559344708 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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