According to the passage, in North America found the silver coins which were originally brought by European explorers call as Norse. The archaeologist’s assumption that this silver coins not genuine piece but it is face and deceive the public. However, in the lecturer speaker indicates that this silver coins are not fake but it is genuine and brought by the Norse. He contradict the each of the reasons provides in the passage.
Firstly, the passage implies that coin found in Maine site in North America which great distance from the Norse settlement, this distance suggest that no connection between the coin and Norse settlement. In contrast with this, the lecturer mentions that in Maine site not only found silver coins but also found other objects which are Norse used on traveling on the Europe to North America. That's why, Silver coins are genuine.
Secondly, the article emphasizes that no coin found in the place of Norse settlement. On the contrary with this, the speaker explains that Norse not permanent lived on this place. When Norse traveled from the North America to Europe they took their coin with him. Therefore, no coins found in the place of the Norse settlement.
Thirdly, the author states that Norse understood that no value of the coins. American people cannot recognize the silver coin as money. Silver coin is used in Europe causes they not took in the North America. On the other hand, the professor points out that Norse used their coins in trade purpose because of appealing surface and attractive coin used for jeweler such as necklaces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'contradicts'.
Suggestion: contradicts
...is genuine and brought by the Norse. He contradict the each of the reasons provides in the...
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Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...tween the coin and Norse settlement. In contrast with this, the lecturer mentions that i...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...aveling on the Europe to North America. Thats why, Silver coins are genuine. Secondl...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...orse not permanent lived on this place. When Norse traveled from the North America t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, in contrast, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99242424242 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46922053408 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.116997792494 855% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6010516576 49.2860985944 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8666666667 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06452816374 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.560492251209 0.272083759551 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222434484255 0.0996497079465 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101982601178 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.372169124284 0.162205337803 229% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672126505424 0.0443174109184 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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