Essay topics: TPO 18- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today, all of us are surrounded by different kind of people. For youngsters in their school time, they mainly communicate with their teachers and their friends. When it comes to the people having the most influence on kids, controversy surrounds the issue of whether they are affected by their teachers or by their friends? I am of the opinion that young people today have more tendency to speak with their friends than any other person. The following explanations will further elaborate on the perspective.
One of the most remarkable aspects of the ongoing discussion which demands to be reflected is that the age matter can be one of the reasons. As a matter of fact, they find more things in common with their same age friends to enjoy their time together. Plus, teachers always discuss the subjects of the class with their students. Thus, this may result in the less passion for more interaction from youngsters. Take my experience, for instance, When I was in high school, I rarely talk and open up to my teachers because they never asked me about my personal problems. However, I consult my issues with my intimate friends. They kept all my secrets, and till now we have made great friendships.
Another noticeable aspect of the topic which needs a keen contemplation is that teachers spend less time with students and they often leave immediately after finishing their lessons. In fact, this does not let students share their feelings and questions with their teachers. Hence, since they do not allocate extra time for their students, it is improbable to understand and establish a stable relationship. As a result, young people will talk to the ones who spend most of their time with, not their teachers who barely talk to them.
Ironically, there are some justifications by one who argues that teachers can have more impacts on kids. In essence, they are more seasoned and have earned more knowledge through their life. Therefore, their tips and suggestions are significantly valuable for students to select the right roads. Perhaps my sister's experience can shed more light on this matter. When she was eighteen, she asked her teacher to give her some notions to wisely select the best college, things like tuition fee, reputation, and scholarships. Thanks to that sober assistance, now, she is a successful doctor.
Taken all the aspects mentioned above into consideration, I am pretty convinced that there are many reasons to support the idea that friends have more impacts on young people. Young people are more interested in talking their same age and also as teachers spend less time with students, kids interact more with their friends. Meanwhile, students should take advantage of their teacher's experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in fact, kind of, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2279.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03090507726 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65365118951 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523178807947 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7631990424 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.16 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.12 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297198489397 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932961975892 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709421512113 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192790140272 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633571591112 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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