TPO-27 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be
more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Many of us at least once in a life-time face the issue whether it is better to get a secure job or to keep waiting for a job which will be more satisfying. Although some people prefer to wait for a work position of their dreams, I would definitely take a secure job. The reasons on which my prospect is based will be discussed in details below.
Firstly, a secure job provides a steady flow of money. The concept of money is a cornerstone of today's society, in fact, we need money to sustain our life and without them we couldn’t survive in contemporary realities; furthermore, many of working a...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 29 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 532 350
No. of Characters: 2496 1500
No. of Different Words: 260 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.803 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.692 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.822 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 167 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.821 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'unearthed'.
Suggestion: unearthed
...or a better job position. This fact was unearth in 2014 Taxes University psychological ...
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Line 5, column 738, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...o depressions and psychological crises. Additionally to it, they reported repeating headache...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.0286738351 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2564.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 531.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8286252354 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91971196481 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504708097928 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 823.5 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4652352738 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.2 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.55 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231660556743 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784455584214 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593116853427 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139064342426 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510263547578 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.