When we need good leaders, it is a good question whether we should choose extroverts or introverts. Leadership is a human specific field but that field requires superhuman work. In my essay I will discuss two important things about why extroverts are better than introverts as a leader.
First of all, leadership requires human interactions in a team. In any area that should be studied and learned, no one can deny that extrovert become quickly close friend than introverts. There was a research in my high school about being close friend time when i was student in 2005. As a expected result extroverts becoming close friends quickly than introverts % 56. As far as I have observed while this research was doing, extroverts already started to manage other people and one of them was me. It can be referred that if leadership is a time constraint operation, extroverts will already have started.
Another point that should be considered is that, a extrovert can be supply enjoyable when they doing their work. Being accompanied by a extrovert leader is a sort of reassuring, sedative and blissful thing. For instance, sometimes things go bad and everyone needs to be directed. When introverts still thinking, extroverts says thought freely like me so workers doesn't need to think what will their leader say. If we need to give a example of this, we should investigate Bill Gates who found Microsoft life. I guess there is no doubt about him success.
To sum up, working with a extroverts who is the same time our close friend and enjoyable person, is really important becoming leader. I strongly believe that, I am an as a extrovert person, I was always taking my team away a better position. In my opinion, every company or team should chose a extrovert to manage them.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. Extroverts are better leaders than introverts. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Some people believe that a college or a university education should be available to all students Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students Discuss these views Which view do you agree with Explain why 45
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, so, still, while, for instance, i guess, no doubt, sort of, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87458745875 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70297675946 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8447266215 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0555555556 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152675618099 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494597291761 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378390707908 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101655434307 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262731760247 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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