You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the life cycle of the salmon.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the development life cycle of salmon in seven phases, starting from the egg to its adulthood.
The first stage of salmon life cycle is when it puts its eggs in fresh water or rivers when they stay until hatch after three months. Once hatching, the baby salmon is called Alvein feeds off the yolk sac for several weeks. The third phase is fry which is now known as Parr, develops finger shaped marking. In the next stage, salmots which are one to three years old forms group and swim out to sea. Salmons become adult and stay in the sea for about one to eight years which they are ready to spawn. The final phase when the spawning salmon dies after two weeks. Their eggs in the fresh water hatch after three months and the life cycle is continued.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 244, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fried'.
Suggestion: fried
...c for several weeks. The third phase is fry which is now known as Parr, develops fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 626.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40845070423 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.79094905349 2.65546596893 67% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 179.1 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.653244007 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.25 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095901257592 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434955806828 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031163362672 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853395101408 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00693289309676 0.0819641961636 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.