The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry
The flow chart depicts different stages to produce bricks used for building industry.
Overall, there are 7 main stages in the process given, beginning with digging phase and culminating with delivery to the customers.
At the first stage of the process, clay is dug up by a big digger. It then is placed on a large metal grid so as to sort oversized pieces and leave small pieces onto a roller. Subsequently, sand and water are added before being shaped by either a wire cutter or a mould in order to create initial bricks.
The process continue with drying stage which newly-created bricks are delivered to an oven and leave those there from 24 to 48 hours prior to moving to kiln chambers, where they are heated at a moderate temperature (200-980) at first and high temperature (870-1300) afterwards. The next step is that bricks are cooling in another chamber from 48 to 72 hours, followed by packaging and delivery stages to the customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...It then is placed on a large metal grid so as to sort oversized pieces and leave small p...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79268292683 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59114058247 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664634146341 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2162128617 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138526942108 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659321275407 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803038370202 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989762130829 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908428460203 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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