Nowadays, young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. Do you agree or disagree?
There is a growing trend in society’s today that many young generations often spend a plenty of time for shopping, this trend can seriously affect the young and the community in the future. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this idea for insidious reasons.
There are a variety of reasons why young people spend a huge amount of time in shoppoing malls. Firstly, they are compulsive shoppers, they are always attracted by buying new things such as new clothes, perfumes or jewelries that they do not really need. For example, a girl or a boy can spend $3 000 for a new T-shirt which is made by a well-known brand like Gucci. The next important reason is that people want to keep up the latest trend with their relatives and their friends. Even they would like to show their status symbols through shopping.
However, spending time in shopping centers also adversely affects both people’s lives and society. First of all, shopping takes a great deal of money. People only focus on earning money for the main reason is shopping rather than saving money for their private purpose in their own life. This leads to the next drawback is getting to debt which exerts pressures on families and societies. For instance, people are ready to buy everything they love with a tight budget.
In conclusion, the young should spend less time in shopping malls because I believe it has negative impacts on both their private life and society as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... For example, a girl or a boy can spend 000 for a new T-shirt which is made by a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81927710843 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44925927291 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610441767068 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6299450464 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3076923077 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322052651933 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107820668118 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709531453036 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188190383917 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223006937098 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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