Everyone appreciate the latest discoveries and get benefit out of these. Perhaps, some people believe that modern innovation cause many problems. I think that modern inventions are helping to solve the critical problems of mankind.
People who hold the viewpoint of inventions causing problems have some valid points. First of all, many discoveries alter the rule of the nature and disrupt the cycle. There are many discoveries in medical science in last one decade which is changing the laws of nature and god. Creating clone for example using human cell is utterly disruptive for society and its repercussion could not be anticipated. Secondly, few inventions have negative effect on society and people suffer invariably during life time. Discover radioactive elements for mankind solve the few problems but it creates the havoc when used inappropriately. Finally, Innovation makes the people lazy and idle. Nowadays, lots of machines are invented which helps human or replace human for chorus works. Thus, people excessively rely on machines and become lethargic and non-creative.
However, other people claim that modern inventions are blessings for human-being. These inventions not only made the life easier but also give new life in few instances. Curing the patients suffering from critical diseases such as cancer, HIV, Ebola etc. completely supports the above point. Furthermore, invention in telecommunication field changed the way people interacted in the past. Now people can communicate and deliver their messages in seconds in any parts of the words. Moreover, internet has added new perspective in individual’s life and now people can get any information they want using internet by using computers from anywhere.
To sum up, advantages derived from modern discoveries outweigh the disadvantages. In some cases, there might be some negative effect but if these innovations are used wisely then tremendous of benefits can be made available for mankind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 498, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ety and people suffer invariably during life time. Discover radioactive elements for mank...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, such as, first of all, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49814126394 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94360888478 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64312267658 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6507607704 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248819052166 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689182256349 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463399770625 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161508500227 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251545355795 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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