The advent of the internet has a huge effect on our modern world. Some people would argue that the internet is precious source of information, while others may consider the opposite point of view. In my opinion, the internet gives us unlimited access to valuable information. I will explain the reasons for my stance in the following essay.
To begin with, the internet provides us with access to all the prestigious universities and libraries all over the world. Let go back in time to the sixties of the fifties, was it possible for a student in Egypt to see the curriculum of Harvard university in just minutes or even seconds? Now, it is possible within a click of your mouse to browse the websites of the most high-ranked universities in the globe. In other words, education and knowledge has become available more than any time in the human history. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I wanted to take study certain course, which was very important to may career, but unluckily, it was very expensive. However, I found this course on some MOOC site delivered by a very well-known American university. Hence, I started studying while I am at my home. Without the internet, that achievement would be nearly a mere dream.
Another noticeable reason, the internet can give us the chance to work online and make money. Not only can you get knowledge, but also money. It is conspicuous that the online trade is growing rapidly. Many people have gained lot of money through the internet. What is more, many individuals are now working online as freelancers, where they provide their services for clients in myriad of specializations. Hence, the internet is very beneficial source of jobs and money. For instance, one of friends is working as a freelance translator, where he now gains money more than his old regular job. This online business support us with more lucrative income and more comfortable lifestyle.
In conclusion, it goes without saying that the cons of the internet overweigh any negative side. This is mainly because of two reasons. It gives us unlimited amount of valuable information, and increases financial income for many persons.
- TOEFL T P O 12 Integrated Writing Task 71
- Tpo 28- integrated writing 85
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 84
- It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours 70
- TPO-25 - Integrated Writing Task In 1938 an archaeologist in Iraq acquired a set of clay jars that had been excavated two years earlier by villagers constructing a railroad line. The vessel was about 2,200 years old. Each clay jay contained a copper cylin 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94808743169 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77201782699 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587431693989 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5111662568 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4583333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183583590723 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460562500135 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490220033091 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107583791251 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433944111644 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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