You are a student who wants to apply to green pines college. you are experiencing financial problems at the moment.Write a letter to the principal of the college explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e student and I would like to apply for a undergraduate degree at green pines but...
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Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l crisis I am unable to do so as of now.  Secondly, I would really appreciate if y...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h my application at Green Pines College.   Finally, I would be glad if you can eith...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...throughout the United States of America.  I am looking forward to hearing from you...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ooking forward to hearing from you soon.  Yours Faithfully  FaizalReza   
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ring from you soon.  Yours Faithfully  FaizalReza   
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon.  Yours Faithfully  FaizalReza   
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2101910828 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50788335737 2.54303337028 138% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662420382166 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 12.6804123711 16% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 16.3608247423 477% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 317.5 44.8134815571 708% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 409.0 76.5299724578 534% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.5 16.8248392259 467% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 39.5 4.34317383033 909% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297564837787 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227366886267 0.0766984524023 296% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364928201364 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151883532108 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586874545029 0.0580467560999 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.4 8.37731958763 506% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.69 70.7449484536 -11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 7.45979381443 452% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 7.59969072165 146% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 8.62886597938 348% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 8.54432989691 389% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 8.15463917526 417% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.