Both lecture and reading passage discuss ecocertified wood. The lecturer talk about positive idea about the ecocertified wood in the United States. He casts doubt the specific points made by the reading passage.
Firstly, the lecturer mentions that consumers perceive that all advertisement not same. They have abilities to distinguish between private company advertisement and some certified companies advertisement. There many companies are trustworthy. Customers favor these company and put the trust on that products. The lecturer casts doubt the reason made in the reading passage that not value of certified wood advertisement among the huge other advertisement and customers do not put the trust on the products.
Secondly, the lecturer explains that customers are care about the prices of products. However, the small amount difference in certified wood and uncertified wood, then customers choose the certified wood because of not lose the quality of woods. The lecturer refute the point made in the reading passage that ecocertified wood more expensive and consumers buy cheaper uncertified wood.
Lastly, the lecturer states that American companies have all the knowledge about the foreign companies business and competitors. If, American wood companies more engage in the national selling product then, the foreign investors and competitors crowded in the market. The lecturer contradicts the point made in the reading passage is that American companies sell their product in their own country is unconvicing idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ompany advertisement and some certified companies advertisement. There many companies are...
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Line 2, column 259, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'these companies'?
Suggestion: this company; these companies
...panies are trustworthy. Customers favor these company and put the trust on that products. The...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'refutes'.
Suggestion: refutes
...lose the quality of woods. The lecturer refute the point made in the reading passage ...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rer refute the point made in the reading passage that ecocertified wood more expe...
^^
Line 4, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have all the knowledge about the foreign companies business and competitors. If, ...
^^
Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ve all the knowledge about the foreign companies business and competitors. If, American ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 230.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65217391304 5.08290768461 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8252306395 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 145.348785872 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486956521739 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.9 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2735006199 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8571428571 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363754909363 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137019346503 0.0996497079465 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658024975137 0.0662205650399 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228041197502 0.162205337803 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760217849073 0.0443174109184 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.8541721854 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 12.2367328918 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 63.6247240618 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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