Friendship is a very important part of human life. However, Sometimes it's hard to keep old friends and make new friends at the same time. To me, I prefer making new friends, which will benefit old friends, widen my opinion of the world and enlarge my social circle.
First of all, making new friends can get new information, which will benefit old friends. I come from a small village in China, and I have some old friends in my village. Before I made new friends outside of my village, I and my old friends only could talk about something happened nearby, and from time to time, we would feel it's boring. Soon after I went to college, I made lots of new friends from big cities, who told me a lot of interesting issues in their cities. When I returned my village and told my old friends these new stories, they were so excited about the outside world. And of course my old friends enjoyed the time with me, so my friendship with my old friends became better than before.
Furthermore, making new friends can widen my view of the world. Everyone lives in his own life and is limited by own experience. There are different ways to break through this limitation, such as reading books, travel around the world and making new friends. Every time when I make new friends, I get different opinions about the world. For example, I ever met a friend named John from Brazil, and he told me lots of political scandals happened in his country, which made me think more and deeper about the democracy in Brazil. Without John I can't know the detail politics in brazil. Frankly, I learned a lot from making new friends and I could have a broad view of the world because of that.
Finally, a social circle could be enlarged by making new friends. In order to keep a colorful life, everyone needs the change in life. One of the best ways to make change is to make new friends. I used to enjoying being alone, because my hobby is reading. However, one day I found that reading all day and all night is so boring, and I decided to make some changes. So I went out and met different people, and during the process I made a couple new friends. They brought to participate different parties and knew more people. Step by step, my social circle was enlarged and my life is full of interesting people, which made me very happy.
Human being is a kind of social animal, so making new friends is from the human nature. Through making new friends, we can keep old friendship, widen the view of the world and have a colorful life. Let's go out and make new friends!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, frankly, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, kind of, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2075.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43376068376 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31851982697 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431623931624 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6976328018 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8518518519 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199543133438 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724877525526 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502965388117 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144588546664 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341971570916 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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