Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both view and give your opinion?
Some people believe that hosting an international sporting event is a great chance for their country to receive economic, social and cultural benefits while others consider it a drawback. For me, however, it will be better for the future of a country when they host an international sporting event.
On the on hand, there are some problems which a country have to encounter if they host a global sporting event. The first and also the biggest concern relates to the costs of hosting the sporting event. It could costs billions of dollars for the country to invest in new infrastructure, upgrade tr...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'cost'
Suggestion: cost
...of hosting the sporting event. It could costs billions of dollars for the country to...
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Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vent. It could costs billions of dollars for the country to invest in new infrast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07102272727 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71509919219 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485795454545 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6025910623 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374539776407 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155032703185 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879031393088 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272639516386 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554685588246 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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