The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates the time spent by Finland’s residents from 1995 to 2004 by different types of calling.
It can be clearly seen that the local landlines were the highest throughout the period, growing from 12000 million minutes to 17000 million minutes from 1995 to 2001, after reached a peak it starts reducing and arrived at a point where it had started.
Although national and international landline calls climb steadily from 6000 to 10200 million minutes at the end of period, though the growth slow down at last two years.
There was dramatic increase in mobile calls from 200 t...
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Sentence: Although national and international landline calls climb steadily from 6000 to 10200 million minutes at the end of period, though the growth slow down at last two years.
Description: The fragment growth slow down is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace slow with verb, past tense
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Attribute Value Ideal
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Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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No. of Different Words: 103 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.534 4.7
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26 21.0
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