The given graph reveals the comparison of global tourists inbound in Brazil, Egypt, Malaysia, France and the USA from 1995 to 2010. Units are measured in millions.Overall, surprisingly there was a significant rise in trends of all countries without any decline over the period. In 1995 International check-in rate in Brazil was the highest with 70 million tourists, while Egypt figured 30 million and Malaysia 20 million. From 1995 to 2000, the arrival rate I Egypt rapidly rocketed (30 and 60 million respectively). However, Brazil’s figure slowly expanded between 1995 and 2005 (70 and 90 million accordingly). Additionally, Egypt continued to grow up to 2010, where, the intersection with Brazil was happened. In Malaysia, there was a minimal increase from 1995 to 2005 (20 and 30 million relatively). In Malaysia inbound data was higher than France and the USA and France rose similarly during the given years. Furthermore, in 2010 the check-in sector of the USA was more than that was in France.
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- The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. 84
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- The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as, juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that married women now work and are not at home to care for their children 73
- Nowadays children are consuming too many sugar-based drinks.What are solutions to this situation? 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
...to 2010. Units are measured in millions.Overall, surprisingly there was a significant r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1472392638 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96713147178 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576687116564 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1381743925 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.2222222222 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0414067987945 0.215688989381 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0190743946986 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030342656271 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0414067987945 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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