Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime, others however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment?
Over the recent years, crimes are arising more in our country however, some people says that punishments are in various types indeed, crimes are also different categories hence, there may be a constant penalty for each type of criminal cruelties. Contrastingly, some others argue that, motivation is one of the major fact for attempting a crime which is an antisocial cruelty it leads to a harm or threats may occurs to the people. These bipolar views are conspicuously verified by the additional information.
To begin with, In our country several types of crimes are remarkable. Firstly, some criminals are cajoled to create crimes which are bombarded, gun shout and making accidents. Moreover, these types of people developed owing to that some reasonable factors included psychological, social and economical. Secondly, people are intensively be with fantasy world, they are solely created their mood and perceptions in order to achieve their particular types of goals. However, these goals are aroused the hassles and menaces which is threat to human being. Finally, they are unaware about the society and even neglected the values, respects etc. Hence, these circumstances are eventually susceptible to the society it do not acceptable at any cost. To be specific, one of our neighbour who is doing a job in Dubai as a business partner but also a criminal due to the extra stability of money power and man power.
On the other hand, some influences makes the man to do some kinds of riots moreover, some political leaders assigned to the people who are lived in the streets or low economical income witnessed as criminals because they are doing by a great force. Furthermore, the high authority members notion will be succeeded because of employers hence, these people should also punishable. Meanwhile, once they completed their task the employees escapes from the contemporary situation. They are illegally planned a murder towards them, the local people get blamed instead of real heroes.
That being said, crimes are various types based on the severity subsequently punishments are in accordingly. However, the great motivation for doing this should be eradicated in the future. Hence, the world will become a part of peaceful conscience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 714, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...ventually susceptible to the society it do not acceptable at any cost. To be speci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23756906077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80334888927 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2807061646 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304214927525 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841720464959 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842287344756 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202557102822 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839814002944 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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