In many countries around the world, it is becoming increasingly common for individuals to leave their paid employment and start their own businesses.
What are the causes and consequences of this phenomenon?
Nowadays, there is a tendency that people quit their current job and start up their own businesses. Through the examination of the reasons behind this issue, it is possible to identify the consequences of the matter.
There are several significant factors that cause the phenomenon of the above, the most important being the unsatisfactory policy given by the employers. The employees choose to leave their companies because of low remuneration and annual bonus, while they have to work hard and under a high pressure. In other word, they feel that they are exploited by their companies.
Another important point which contribute to their leaving is that they see no chance for them to develop higher skills and gain further experiences or being promoted to a higher position in their company. In addition, most people believe that being self-employed will be able to earn more and change their present life. Normally, these seems to look at who have got successful startups rather than the cases of failure.
This results in a wide range of consequences; for example, there are many small-sized enterprises, which have been established from these individuals go bankruptcy after a short time of operation. It is due to being unable to compete with large-scaled companies. Accordingly, those who lose all what they had become pessimistic in their life and their family life may also be affected by their failures.
In conclusion, starting up a business originates from the desire of being success and having a better life. However, it always has potentials risks and consequences that people who choose to leave their paid employment will have to face up. Therefore, it is important to make proper decisions in order to avoid unexpected consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18596491228 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88139615965 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0324485733 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294440290304 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871039877933 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713285283993 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158915139839 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442124196802 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.