Every year several local languages die out. Some people think that this not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree this opinion?
Undoubtedly, in this modern world, numerous local languages are fading out in most all of countries through modernization in human life. It raises controversy whether this issue might compel us to evoke culture degradation. Some people believe this phenomena would not generate paradox for them because there is a benefit which is reducing their responsibility to learn traditional languages. Nonetheless, as an individual, I refuse this opinion because local languages are patrimonies from our ancestor.
The most problem which affect folk's volition to learn the local languages are the languag...
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yeah thank you very much. Actually, grammar is my biggest obstacle in my writing. I really appreciate your corrections. I hope one day i could stand beside Tessy's place.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 - 8.0 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 391 350
No. of Characters: 2163 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.447 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.532 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.984 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 181 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 145 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 112 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 65 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.619 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.075 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.536 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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It is hard to get 9.0 out of
It is hard to get 9.0 out of 9. Only 2-3 essays got 9.0 by Tessy. She wrote over 120 essays totally.
First of all, the Essay E-rater needs to give the full mark to the essay, then human graders will confirm whether it is reasonable.
Second, around 350 words and 200 different words. (you have)
Third, good ideas and arguments (you have)
Fourth, polished languages (you need some improvements)
Omg, you gave detailed answer
Omg, you gave detailed answer for my silly question. I would try to improve my polished languages. Really, thank you very much for your kindness. I have no idea to say it much than it
Sentence: I refuse this opinion because local languages such a patrimony from our ancestor.
Description: Need a complete sentence after because
Suggestion: I refuse this opinion because local languages are patrimonies from our ancestor.
Sentence: The most problem affect folk's volition to learn the local languages the language's complexities
Suggestion: The most problems which affect folk's volition to learn the local languages are the language's complexities
Sentence: Most of modern children believe that understanding Javanese language is quite difficult concerning font and pronunciation of Javanese language is very unique. It has different configuration from international letter concerning the pattern is complex alike Japanese letter.
Description: it is wrong to put a complete sentence after 'concerning'
Sentence: On the other hand, the pivotal function of local languages are to continue the ancestor languages heritage as a legacy for the future generations.
Suggestion: On the other hand, the pivotal functions of local languages are to continue the ancestor languages heritage as a legacy for the future generations.
Sentence: Indeed, it is a language communication among my family regarding all of my family respect the Javanese language as our authentic identity.
Sentence: They preclude to disdain the function of region languages which is vital regarding local languages are the source of national language ' Bahasa Indonesia'.
Description: it is wrong to put a complete sentence after 'regarding'
Sentence: In conclusion, local languages are important, as it function, role, and position of a region or nation.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: replace it function to its function
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 388 350
No. of Characters: 2145 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.438 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.528 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.979 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 180 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 144 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 114 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.476 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.013 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.381 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.534 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5