Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.

Universities and colleges are the place where a student spends most crucial part of his life exploring on his interests, ideas and dealing with many varied things. Education along with sports and social activities contributes to the holistic development of an individual. So, it is important to receive equal financial support for that as well.

Education is the key to Success. But, in this transient world, where every task is interconnected Education alone does not lead to Success. Admittedly, it is conspicuous that spending money on classes and libraries benefits by giving better knowledge to the students. In light to this, I would like to add on the fact that performing social activities contributes to the development of every individual while entering the competent world. It helps to improve the communication skills, eye contact is improved which tells that a person has the ability to listen and also deliver the matter confidently. According to the researchers, the most successful people are the ones’ who have good knowledge which is interconnected with their communication skills.

A students’ potential is realized when he comes out of the comfort zone and tries to explore his potential by knowing himself and finding the right path for his future. When he tries out many risky activities and performs thing that is eccentric and not prevalent, he becomes successful. One of the best example for this is the world famous cricket player Sachin Tendulkar who did not excel in his studies, but definitely had centuries in most of his test matches. By this, I would say that, if a student is very keen about a particular sport, and chooses sports as his future, by playing sports in college, one can mend himself to be a better and successful person as a sports' player.

In addition, playing Sports is a fringe benefit as it helps to sharpen the mindset, makes a person to think faster and better, which adds on to his better performance in the academics. Lots of personal, social and health benefits are gained through this. Perhaps, not surprisingly, people who play sports are more active than others. It is an escape from peer pressure and a stress relief for some as well.

All things considered, I believe that the above examples show the importance of sports and social activities and are abreast with education in a students' life in University.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 677, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... be a better and successful person as a sports player. In addition, playing Sports ...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ies and are abreast with education in a students life in University.
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86391693351 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542929292929 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1198563446 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160526801418 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548896525531 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648864271748 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107862717974 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684183675755 0.0645574589148 106% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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