More and more fathers taking a break from their careers so that they can stay at home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full-time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The issue of whether or not fathers should stay at home for looking after their children has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that fathers can also struggle to bring up their children staying at home instead of their wives. Now I will discuss it in my essay.
First of all, it was a duty-bound for men to meet family’s monetary necessity and protect them from every possible hazard since ancient times. Therefore, men have got physical ability to provide any of this issues in a family. But it must not be understood that fathers ‘ have complete right to refuse taking after their ch...
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Sentence: Therefore, men have got physical ability to provide any of this issues in a family.
Description: The word issues is not usually used as a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to issues
Sentence: In a nutshell, I strongly believe that, each parents have their own duties in a family.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and parents
Sentence: Another reason to be outlined is most phsychologists consider that, children need mothers' care rather than fathers'.
Error: phsychologists Suggestion: psychologists
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