Many people join distance learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary time, the opportunity for gaining degree becomes more integrated with technology which people can remote their study outside the classes. This recent educational invention predisposes people to engage distance learning programs. However, myriad of educators argue that virtue of this novel method is doubtful and unproven to achieve academic competence.
After the industrial progression, technological invention provides the opportunity for everyone who desires to continuing study. A rising of numbers of people who utilize internet always accrue by time then it creates sever...
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Sentence: Students in Engineering major, in particular machine engineering for example, most of them need to practice their knowledge directly after receive the material but distance learning not provide those needs.
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Suggestion: Refer to after and receive
Sentence: In a nutsell, although distance learning is new and unproven compare it to university and to college, it would give the awareness to people importance of heuristics method in education.
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Suggestion: ...it would give the awareness to people the importance of heuristics method in education.
Sentence: In a nutsell, although distance learning is new and unproven compare it to university and to college, it would give the awareness to people importance of heuristics method in education.
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