Whether dangerous sports should be banned. Discuss both view.
In the wake of social development, an increasing number of people are concerned about extreme sports such as bungee or boxing. Therefore, whether the authorities should prevent citizens from playing these sports is a highly debated issue. It is necessary to look into pros and cons of situation before forming an reasonable conclusion.
It is irrefutable that these kind of activities certainly causes injuries, though varies from person to person. In this regard, a person who participated in these hazardous sports would frequently suffer from both mental and physical pain due to enormous amount of massive body contacts. As a consequence, those who involved in sports like martial art might not able to control themselves, they could bring about permanent trauma, even death to the opponents. Furthermore, it may prbably be harmful to the spectators, children and the adolenscences to be exact, because they could imitate what were on the screen and form detrimental habits.
Having said that, despite the negative effect, x-sports are still legalized for reasons. Firstly, sports bring happiness to players, which provide athletes both amateurs and professionals the tremendous amount of pride and joy while defeating competitors. Besides, most of television shows have warned for the viewers Secondly, dangerous sports, to somewhat, are the jobs of those born with talents or diligence. Accordingly, millions people will lose their jobs in case the government forbid them. To illustrate, one of the most well-known competition in the world, WWE is somewhere many people would gain rewarding perk after tough competition. It, of course, has been strictly censored and supervised by the authorities with safety equipment.
In conclusion, considering the debate above, my view is that people should have the choices to decide themselves since they all well-aware of any risks involved as well as the safety regulations being in place to minimize the injuries. For that reason, prohibiting extreme sport is unnecessary. I would pen down by saying that "We do have choice".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44307692308 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91119203304 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670769230769 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4542131296 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190816759156 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478547494954 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464537090002 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100104411323 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016367839749 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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