The pie charts illustrate age spectrum of population in Yemen and Italy between two years in 2000 to provision at 2050. We can detect easily age average is greatest at Italy in two years.
Yemen have younger population than Italy, almost half of Yemen citizens at between 0-14 years at 2000. 15-59 years people are 47 % of nation by the way, only 3.6 % of Yemen at over 60. Based on estimating for 2050, Yemen will get older. Rate of 0-14 age groups will decrease to 37 % conversly 15-59 range will increase to 57% ın addition to this over 60 people will rise, too.
61% of Italy population are in 15-59 range thats mean is age average of Italy is extremely higher than Yemen also 24 % of western country are over 60 in 2000. 0-14 ages group have negative rate, ın 2000 14.3 % of Italy are teenagers however this percantage will be 11.5 % in expecting for 2050. Italy is getting older, too. In 2050, greatest number of Italy citizen will be in 15-59 range, together with this over 60 people is 42 % of country.
In essene, we can reach this conclusion that Italian people have high age average all the time, this won’t change in 2050 estimating. Over 60 rates have fairly differences between two country, there are too much more people old people in Italy, to comparision with Yemen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65938864629 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29274488664 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53711790393 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3308615043 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9166666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280215970913 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126979459986 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093228836594 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196419760963 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900270835502 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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