Dear Mr,
I am writing this letter regarding my insurance claim about the cellphone that I have lost on my recent vacation in the Dubai last month.
Unfortunately, I lost my cellphone in the last day. It was a black one. Not only was it a new model of “Iphone”, but it was also a very rare and expensive model, I have bought recently.
As far as my memory help, the last place that I had my cellphone was in my hotel. I was swiftly packing my things since I did not have adequate time to get to my plane. Hence, I guess I have fallen down it beside the bed in the light of the fact that I was not attentive at that occasion.
Fortunately, I had gotten travel insurance prior I want to commence my travel. So, I would appreciate if you could finance my expense with respect to purchasing a new one. It would be wise if you take an immediate action at your earliest with regard to this issue.
Thank you for your understanding and consideration,
Yours faithfully
Omid
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsideration, Yours faithfully Omid
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, i guess, with regard to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46994535519 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84082589005 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4431798876 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3636363636 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184520497672 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724905049468 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653064567878 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117179916538 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692456329625 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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