The only responsibility of corporate executives, provided they stay within the law, is to make as much money as possible for their companies.
There is a lot of pressure on corporate executives when it comes to bringing in profit for their companies. But along with financial gains, I also believe that it is their responsibility to care about their clients and consumers, the company’s image and also the country that is enabling them to run their operations.
It is important for the executives to take care of its clients as well employees. A profitable company is only possible if the people working there are happy and feel that they are a part of the company. They should ensure that the employees’ needs and problems are heard. Small things like acknowledging their birthdays to arranging events for them will create a positive vibe encouraging them to give their best at work.
Also a relationship of trust is required between the company and its clients to foster goodwill in the industry. Instead of always thinking about profit, they need to think how their clients will benefit from their actions. For example, if there are situations that might bring the company profit but harm their clients, they need to make a decision to out the clients’ needs first. Not only will this bring about a feeling of good will, it will also help in building long term relationships with them.
It is also important that the company’s executives give back to the country and the community. In the times of tragedy or need, they should support their country in any way they can and also encourage their employees to take art in various programs that are working for the betterment of the society. For example, when Bill Gates decided to donate half of his fortune to charities it will not only help the needful but also created a positive image of Bill Gates as well as his company.
Hence, I believe that it is imperative that for the long term betterment of the company, the executives should not solely focus on the profits but also all on the other aspects related to the company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...aging them to give their best at work. Also a relationship of trust is required bet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80473372781 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68951021839 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470414201183 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6128338546 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193682611374 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745421856366 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531158936362 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115963779647 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509130562488 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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