When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings
With increasing population , the need for more land has increased. It can be to widen roads for the burgeoning number of vehicles, especially in many Indian and European cities which have grown in a haphazard manner, for residential purposes to accommodate the expanding population, or even for an entertainment park build purely for financial gain. Often it so happens that the land under question might already be occupied. It may already have a residential building present there or might even have a market of some sort.
When it comes to these buildings, the decision to pull them down weighs heavily on us. For one reason, these old building are often of some historical importance, for example in countries like India or Greece which have always had a rich history . They might be an significant part of the region's culture and heritage acting as a tourist attraction as these buildings and structures often represent architectural marvel of some period in History. They are as important as Picasso's paintings which are preserved so lovingly around the world.
In the cases where these building lack any historical importance , modern planners will have to present a cogent case in front of an unbiased committee outlining their reason for occupying the land. Also, due importance needs to be given to alternatives like skyscrapers for residence or flyovers to avoid traffic before we tear the buildings down. In most of the cities across the world we notice that there is a lack of proper planning such that land under use has not been utilised to its full extend. Instead of expanding future land, proper utilization of the existing area should be done.
Modern developers also need to research the possibility that these old building might actually serve their purpose, For example the post office might be housed in one of these building or they might serve as a market place depending on their location. This will serve the purpose of preserving these historical building as well as will address the needs of the people.
But we should also remember that these old building are often a safety hazard. Without proper maintenance , these building might become a danger to the people living in them as well as the public around them. Let's take the example of Stephen house in Kolkata where a fire broke out due to bad wiring . In such cases, proper investigation needs to be carried about the viability of these building and in case they are found wanting, a plan needs to be devised either to tear it down or to make renovations to it.
Modern development should not come at the cost of our rich history as once gone these reminders of our culture will not come back. A proper investigation with a great emphasis on alternatives is the plan that developers should consider when it comes to these old building.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91213389121 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6643638064 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497907949791 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5154601763 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285239052952 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831752747104 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048929281998 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15330203321 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341992123374 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.