It is true that hordes of people assume that human spend the happiest time during their childhood but adult life is accepted by others as the happiest era. I am in this opinion that both of them have their own pleasure and I intend to argue both periods
As a child ,humans are spending the first level of their life without being responsible for any duty and far from real life they are growing up within their word. They just do some routine activities, ranging from discovering first facts to encountering some weird situation which are so attractive for them and make them feel happy. Further, their parents are responsible for making a proper atmosphere for learning and making progress. Moreover, as they are dependent to their loved ones mentally and financially , they do not feel worry about harmful issues and challenges which are surrounding them. For example, for my five years old brother, the vital problem are briefed in playing with new toys and eating delicious foods as he always realizes the home the best place and the time is the happiest time. I personally think being free mentally from the ordinary life is the crucial problem which derive a great pleasure to the children and them happiness.
It is an undeniable fact that teenagers do wish to become an adult not only for being independent financially but also for taking charge of their own life and making decision according their enthusiasm. In my opinion beside these reasons , having a perfect character helps them experience some other truths and feel cheerful. First, entering and graduating and eventually getting a job will provide them an opportunity of starting a new life either as a husband or a wife which is one of the happiest time during life. More importantly, if you tell some one that he or she possesses a baby , undoubtedly, they will express that it was the best message that they have got ever. When I told my uncle, for instance, that he got a baby , although he was suffering from terrible economical problems , I could see clearly he was incredibly happy. Regardless of any other matter, I think being capable enough to help others by personal funds makes feel happy which is not comparable to any fact.
By the way of conclusion, although it is highly unlikely to claim that which period of life is the happiest, I reaffirm my position that times are enjoyable.
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these views and give your opinion 67
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, i think, by the way, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79901960784 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57524921018 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.1236901095 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.857142857 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1428571429 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167193793741 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629127854102 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498012097414 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117446249181 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495617810112 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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