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Both the reading and the lecture are about buzzimg. Reading express three dadadvantages for buzzing but on the speaking mem disagree and refugas all these claims.
First, in the reading author says people should know a person who is advertising a product geting money for do that. According to the reading by this people can understand if buzzers want to give them incorrecet information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...or do that. According to the reading by this people can understand if buzzers want t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.4613686534 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 22.412803532 18% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 30.3222958057 20% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 326.0 1373.03311258 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 64.0 270.72406181 24% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09375 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.82842712475 4.04702891845 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69185693342 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 52.0 145.348785872 36% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.8125 0.540411800872 150% => OK
syllable_count: 96.3 419.366225166 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1820549232 49.2860985944 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.5 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 21.698381199 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.09492273731 49% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164545081498 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863780718246 0.0996497079465 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714336605568 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120170388649 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666979767933 0.0443174109184 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 63.6247240618 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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