Working for long hours could be exhausting for the employers who are responsible for certain jobs. I agree with the statement that worker would like to do multiple tasks in a day because people can use their creativity and learning new things each day.
When an employee gives their staff a chance to work in a variety of tasks which worker should either find a solution for a problem or schedule a plan for a project. His staff will be motivated to make all their effort to do their best and have positive impact on thier boss. To give an example, a mobile company ask their worker to design the smartphone which has useful application with cheaper price compared to other mobilephone in the market. In my opinion, staff of the company will compete with other company to create a great phone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 657.0 1977.66487455 33% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 142.0 407.700716846 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62676056338 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 4.48103885553 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41545189469 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 212.727598566 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669014084507 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 618.680645161 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3182954721 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127433692265 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595961185365 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531251602697 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103938555902 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141832788009 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 86.8835125448 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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