A growing number of people believe that the salary level of skilled sportspersons are all time high, where as others claim that wages given seem perfectly reasonable. This essay will discuss both sides and come to a suitable conclusion.
On the one hand, opponents of top salary highlight that these people are unable to raise the standard of life of needy people in society.To put it in other way, majority of players are focused on promoting their personal well being rather than concentrating on uplifting the quality of life of them. To illustrate, many athletes purchase super cars, build seve...
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Dear sir, I would like to point out my weaknesses. Thank you.
Hello everybody
Hello everybody
there is a mistake in this writing that nobody paid attention to;
Paragraph 2 line 3; To illustrate,......
illustrate is a transitive verb and needs an object undoubtedly. So, it must be like this;
To illustrate the point,.....;
To illustrate that,...
please let me know your idea!!
But I see other examples,
But I see other examples, like:
6 stories I'd love to illustrate.
Sidewalk Flowers, the first book I illustrated in this city, is so Toronto.
these examples that you are
these examples that you are mentioning are correct because they have their own objects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...killed sportspersons are all time high, where as others claim that wages given seem perf...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...dard of life of needy people in society.To put it in other way, majority of player...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lifestyle'?
Suggestion: lifestyle
...ild several mansions and spend a lavish lifestyles. Unlike, doctors, scientists and so on ...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...icket sales, television and merchandise.Therefore, there can be no doubt that it would no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39275766017 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9364088138 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643454038997 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.891648054 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.923076923 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133161340921 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427673221656 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487111831653 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764331652862 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588718056425 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.