in the set of materials The reading passage discuss about humpback whales who have the ability and intelligent to use star for navigation for long distance migration and provide some way of determined there ability to use star for migration. The lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. Lecturer say that there is no evidence to support that lecture Whales have that intelligence level to use star.
Firstly, the reading passage claim that humpback whales have very high level of intelligence that is determiner by it's high degree of complexity. whales have cognitive ability and sensory level are high. However, the lecture argued that there have no evidence to support whales have that level of intelligence. some other animal like duck have that power but that don't determined there brain are highly developed.
Secondly, the reading posits that whales are migrated in straight line. they can travel comfortably in the ocean they can't depends on land mark of land feature. However, the professor say that earth magnetic force work on that case. whales brain have a small bio magnetic force that send signal and arrange that data.
finally, the reading argue that spy- hopping only unusual behavior of whales to observe the star . But the listening dispute this point by saying that some animal have that level of spy- hopping ability like shark and whales have spy- hopping in the day time where all star are not visible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
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...ation and provide some way of determined there ability to use star for migration....
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'saith', 'says'.
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...he claims made in the article. Lecturer say that there is no evidence to support th...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Whales) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
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...evidence to support that lecture Whales have that intelligence level to use star. ...
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...her animal like duck have that power but that dont determined there brain are hi...
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...mal like duck have that power but that dont determined there brain are highly deve...
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...t whales are migrated in straight line. they can travel comfortably in the ocean the...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...an travel comfortably in the ocean they cant depends on land mark of land feature. H...
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...earth magnetic force work on that case. whales brain have a small bio magnetic force t...
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...ain have a small bio magnetic force that send signal and arrange that data. f...
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...l behavior of whales to observe the star . But the listening dispute this point by...
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... have that level of spy- hopping ability like shark and whales have spy- hopping ...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spied'.
Suggestion: spied
...ing ability like shark and whales have spy- hopping in the day time where all star...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 241.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01244813278 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32924468015 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50622406639 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.0603882397 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9230769231 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 21.698381199 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06452816374 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382948870753 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135829530575 0.0996497079465 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863799673347 0.0662205650399 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228147069119 0.162205337803 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504127630836 0.0443174109184 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 63.6247240618 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.