Society is a unit; which is comprised of young, adults and elderly. Most of the decisions are taken by elderly people and adults. Therefore, I believe that young people do not participate in decision making affecting future of our society. The reasons can be busy schedule and lack of interest.
First of all, In this competitive world, most of the young people are too busy in their schools, colleges, jobs and day-today- activities. They don't want to get involved in such decisions influencing society. For example, most of the young people in my community do not spare there time for community services. The don't even come to attend the meetings in which important decisions are going to be taken and implemented. Thus, because of such non involvement the young people cannot influence the decision.
Furthermore, young people are attracted to spend time in other recreational activities such as pubs, social media etc they think other things to be too boring to consider. They really don't care about society; which is very sad but true. For instance, many young adults do not vote during elections. They do not consider voting as their civil duty. This really will affect the future of our country.
Finally, there are always some exceptions; fewer from younger generation is actively getting involved in politics or are becoming a part of community services or volunteering but the number of youngsters involved are very less as compared to the requirement of our society. few adults also don't consider them mature enough to get involved and hence don't support them. Thus, they are unable to influence the future of the society.
In conclusion, more number of youngsters should be motivated in order to increase there association in the important decisions making process for the enrichment of our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: IS_COMPRISED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of' or 'is composed of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of; is composed of
Society is a unit; which is comprised of young, adults and elderly. Most of the ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s, jobs and day-today- activities. They dont want to get involved in such decisions ...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... there time for community services. The dont even come to attend the meetings in whi...
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Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...ings to be too boring to consider. They really dont care about society; which is very sad b...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... be too boring to consider. They really dont care about society; which is very sad b...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...er of youngsters involved are very less as compared to the requirement of our soci...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Few
...ared to the requirement of our society. few adults also dont consider them mature e...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...irement of our society. few adults also dont consider them mature enough to get invo...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mature enough to get involved and hence dont support them. Thus, they are unable to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10702341137 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68486684436 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6913889427 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8333333333 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159941035218 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572762417358 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353837490089 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943282160291 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559175782668 0.0645574589148 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.