past experiance is always shape the way we look at the people?
Experiance is best teacher who shape anybodies mind. No one is tere who is not gone theough any kind of experiance which is shape their life. Ever persons perseption towards life is differant and it differs from person to person. And it is equally true that once you experiance anything you can not able to forget that. No matter the experiance is bad or good but that always teach us new lesson of life. There are so many incidance happened in my life, I learned from every incidence, I experainace that and it shape in my life.
The first incidence is that when I was in collage I live with my roommate, she was a selfish kind of person. In middle of our term I fall in sick and that time I told her to inform my class teacher about my illness and extention in submission. But she forgot to inform the teacher and I miss my submission. I got a low gread in that project. From that time I always do my responsibility myself. I never give my work to another person or never depend on another for any kind of favour.
The second incidence is that I newly learned to drive a car. In one road there was a signboard about the driving speed but I did not able to see the signboad because I as I am new driver I always drive very slowly and extreemly causious. But even though I was a careful I hit to a post box. Then Cop are came and apply fine on me. But the Police officer was very nice and humble person he give me a littile fine and tought me the signal for help. It is very heplful for me because from that time I always obey the rules of traffic and I always admire the police officer.
In conclusion it is always true that any kind of past experiance wheather is if bad or good it always shape the way we look at the people and we learned from that a very big leaason of the life. And it hepl us to look from a different perspective towards a life.
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Sentence: No one is tere who is not gone theough any kind of experiance which is shape their life.
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Sentence: Ever persons perseption towards life is differant and it differs from person to person.
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Sentence: There are so many incidance happened in my life, I learned from every incidence, I experainace that and it shape in my life.
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Sentence: But the Police officer was very nice and humble person he give me a littile fine and tought me the signal for help.
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Sentence: No one is tere who is not gone theough any kind of experiance which is shape their life.
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Error: experiance Suggestion: experience
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Sentence: Ever persons perseption towards life is differant and it differs from person to person.
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Sentence: And it is equally true that once you experiance anything you can not able to forget that.
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Sentence: No matter the experiance is bad or good but that always teach us new lesson of life.
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Sentence: There are so many incidance happened in my life, I learned from every incidence, I experainace that and it shape in my life.
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Error: incidance Suggestion: incidence
Sentence: The first incidence is that when I was in collage I live with my roommate, she was a selfish kind of person.
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Sentence: In middle of our term I fall in sick and that time I told her to inform my class teacher about my illness and extention in submission.
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Sentence: But she forgot to inform the teacher and I miss my submission.
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Sentence: I got a low gread in that project.
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Sentence: In one road there was a signboard about the driving speed but I did not able to see the signboad because I as I am new driver I always drive very slowly and extreemly causious.
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Sentence: But the Police officer was very nice and humble person he give me a littile fine and tought me the signal for help.
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Sentence: It is very heplful for me because from that time I always obey the rules of traffic and I always admire the police officer.
Error: heplful Suggestion: helpful
Sentence: In conclusion it is always true that any kind of past experiance wheather is if bad or good it always shape the way we look at the people and we learned from that a very big leaason of the life.
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Error: experiance Suggestion: experience
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Sentence: And it hepl us to look from a different perspective towards a life.
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