you have visited another company last week and you saw an equipment which can be useful for your company too.
Topics to cover- describe the equipment
Why it can he useful/helpful
Ask some more questions abt the equipment
Dear Sir/Madam,
This is Nimish from XYZ private limited and writing to you with regards to the digital weighing machine. Your sales team gave a detailed demonstration of the device and I am thoroughly impressed with it. We are keen in placing an initial order of 20 machines if you can help confirm few more details.
Firstly, it has an all metallic, unibody design to enhance robustness. The weighing scale can measure up to 500 kilos of load under any atmospheric condition. The warranty period is 2 years, covering firmware chip which stores data of last 7 days. Secondly, I really appreciate the 3-D technique of capturing the photo while measuring the weight of the stocks.
However, there was no electrical point shown during the demo, I am perplexed if it is battery operated. In case it is, can the batteries be replaced and recharged. We need to factor this additional cost on us. Additionally, did not see picture extraction process from the equipment, if details can be shared will be of great help. Above all, the machine is awesome and will solve our purpose greatly.
Looking forward to an early response from you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89690721649 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69263667682 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.737113402062 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.2581933511 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0769230769 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161148511876 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487686551599 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442875414167 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924602816504 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178860489901 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.