some people think that they earn to enjoy life and some believe that its important for their future
Discuss both views
Money is the indispensable part of life. While some have opposed that enjoying life to the extreme heights with no savings is unacceptable, and others believe that saving for future without any fun, will be living a mundane lifestyle. In my opinion, an equilibrium is required to save funds for future and healthy lifestyle at the same time.
The proponents of the idea believe that saving appropriately is the ideal way to relish life. In the age of cut throat competition, one could be in need of money anytime, so a decent amount of deposits in the bank will become handy in case of emergency. Moreover, one can create wealth by investing surplus money into stock markets not only for itself but also for the whole family.
On the other hand, there is a section in the society who likes to follow in living with the moment. Their philosophy of life is living in the present and travel around the world. These people travel to exotic tourist spots for vacations. They shop expensive merchandise and accessories to show off to the public. With limited or no care, or worry about bank balances and credit card bills.
I believe in the concept of balanced lifestyle where one does not have to sacrifice fun by saving too much for future requirements. In this way, wealth and health are created with enjoyable lifestyle.
To sum up, spending money to live lavishly with all savour all comforts is not the ideal situation with nothing left and saving everything to secure future will lead to a boring life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7566539924 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52957180896 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0558044008 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162511453128 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546438644325 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436105098514 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083582115171 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419899658662 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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