There have been some problems with public transportation in your area recently.
Write a letter to the management of the public transport company. In your letter
- describe the problems
- explain how these problems are affecting the public
- suggest some changes that could be made
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the poor transportation service in Sky Villa where I currently reside. Until recently most of the residents have been satisfied with the quality of service your company had rendered.
These past few weeks have been difficult, as routine tasks like getting the little kids to school has proved very difficult as a result of faulty buses, which one of your company representatives assured will take only three working days to fix. Another problem as a direct consequence of the lack of silo trucks also provided by your company is the strong stench emanating from the garbage heap in the communal waste disposal area of the Estate.
On behalf of the Estate it is only fair that I ask that last week's fees for both garbage removal and school drop-offs be refunded to all affected residents and also that alternative arrangements be made as soon as possible should there be delays beyond this weekend.
Looking forward to the return to smooth services.
Yours faithfully,
Mr. Henry Fimibama
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| 2018-08-18 | dalexphilips | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Until” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in Sky Villa where I currently reside. Until recently most of the residents have bee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00568181818 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59150087938 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721590909091 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1068319679 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138647049706 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566890578041 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389588056444 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585419966931 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529646374973 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.