TPO11_ Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The advent of the internet has changed our lives from different perspectives. We can have access to every information we are seeking in a fraction of a second. The impacts that this fact can have are disputed. I subscribe to the view that the overall impact of getting information from the internet is positive.
First of all, having access to the Internet, researchers can find the information they are looking for much easier and faster, and as a result, they can save their times to concentrate on innovative parts of research. A few decade ago, researchers needed to spend too much time in order to go to the library and look for the information they needed in hundreds of books, and even if they could find the information after several hours of searching the library books, it could have been dated. Another aspect of research that has perfectly developed is having access to data from different experiments all over the world. For example, the information from particle physics experiments conducted in large particle colliders is available to researcher all over the world.
In addition to research materials, another merit of the internet is that people can rate different materials, criticize them, and provide the potential audience with extra information. Take a movie as an example; numerous people have ranked each movie on IMDB website. There are also many criticisms about each movie from artistic and general points of view. There is also a parent guide on IMDB whereby parents can decide whether let their children watch a specific movie ar not.
On the other hand, not all the information provided on the Internet is credible. An internet user is prone to be a victim of the political or religious parties who use the internet in order to advertise their benefits. Moreover, rumors can spread at an astounding pace through the internet. So, the internet user should be aware of these destructive materials and try to avoid them.
To sum up, even though I admit that the information provided on the net can be destructive by times, I hold the view that the benefits of the internet information outweigh its disadvantages.
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- TPO 06_ Integrated Writing 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...nd. The impacts that this fact can have are disputed. I subscribe to the view that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97777777778 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75600354781 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7946988171 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.411764706 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14300657894 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487892900059 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403586942957 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808614363446 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189527268187 0.0645574589148 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.